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The Adventures of Harriet Potter: Year 4 - Ch43 by the-mind-of-kleinnak The Adventures of Harriet Potter: Year 4 - Ch43 by the-mind-of-kleinnak

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Great Knobbly Plates of Toes! It's the final chapter of Year 4!

Don't let them see you cry, old man... don't let them see you cry...

For those reading on tablets/phones: archiveofourown.org/works/2798…

For those who're curious, Finn's playlist: www.youtube.com/playlist?list=…

Cover art by Xijalle

Kieran O'Brien, Marcus Van Der Lakk, Scott McIntyre, Daniel Dusk, Nanette/Rosie Sinistra property of Night-Miner 

Kazunari/Mayu Watanuki property of littlebityamelie 

Dora Flamel, Finnbar Negus propery of ME!

Sherrod Howe and Jonathan Morrisey inspired from Sir Arthur Conan Doyle

Solomon Kinney inspired from Hiromu Arakawa

All other characters and locations property of J.K. Rowling.

Original concept by Night-Miner and littlebityamelie

Proof reading/editting by Night-Minerlittlebityamelie and E-HIndigo

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Link back to Chapter 42: The Adventures of Harriet Potter: Year 4 - Ch42 by the-mind-of-kleinnak
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sweety665 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I know I'm really late to the party :P , but I just wanted to say that the ending of Year 4 was freaking amazing and I'm looking forward for Year 5 to start!
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the-mind-of-kleinnak Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
hurray :D soon... sooon...
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KiriMaka94 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2016
I was not expeting an ending like this one. Y4 was a huge plot twist, by wich I mean: Dumblebore telling Harriet about the prophecy??!!!! What are we going to do in Y5????:o (Eek) 
Anyway, have a Merry Chrismas and a Happy New Year!
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the-mind-of-kleinnak Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
oh you're not ready for what's coming in y5.








no one is...
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KiriMaka94 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2016
Have I ever told you how enerving you can be sometimes??? Because you can be VERY enerving sometimes :)
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the-mind-of-kleinnak Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
and yet you all keep coming back ;)
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KiriMaka94 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2016
And I think that says a lot about all of us, don't you?
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the-mind-of-kleinnak Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
indeed so :-P
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dragonheart876 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2016
FINALLY!!! I can't believe that it's over!!!! That was one heck of a journey for sure ;)

When I read the title of chapter 42, I thought that it would be perhaps the marauders who would be forced to go away I did not expect it to be dumbledore of all the people!!!! Interesting twist with that 👍👍👍

I pity barty! Though he himself is responsible for what happened! I'm curious to know what exactly made barty place so much trust on someone like kinnney . I'm honestly quite excited for when harriet will run into Barty again, any chances of it happening in Yr 5? ;)

I'm quite disappointed that I missed a confrontation between Daniel and the Dursley's!!! That would have surely been EPIC! Though I'm glad that Harriet doesn't have to go back there. But doesn't Figg live right next to the Dursley's?! Won't they know that Harriet is staying there!? And why do I feel that her summer is not going to be as happy as we're expecting?! Uhhhh!!!!!

Nice touch with kanzurai!!!
Glad that we got a Finn moment in there!!! ❤ ❤ ❤
Is Harriet emitting pheromones or something?lolllllllll
First hyland and now Blaise?! Back off you both ... Cause Finn is still at the top ;)

I'm REALLY LOOKING FORWARD to Yr 5! It's gonna be pretty intense!!!! Can't wait! :)
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E-H-Indigo Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
dragonheart876

I feel the great thing about this year coming to an end is seeing how different the journey is compared to Harry's. With us being 4 Americans and 1 Australian we were able to create more depth and width to the wizarding world. It's much more reltable, I think, and amazing that we explore these journeys between AHP,  LFPF and MORA. It shows just how small a piece of the pie Harriet's story is.

1. In cannon Albus may have well left Hogwarts the way he alienated and kept Harry in the dark. That is not possible with Harriet. We have established she is a Legilmens and need to be trained in Occlumancy. Therefore, Albus relates to Harriet differently and can't be sneaky around her. I like that he's up front with Harriet, even though it is still shady that he admits: "I would have kept you in the dark as long as possible."  I cannot however say one way or the other why he's leaving. You'll have to wait for Year 5 in order to see that.

2. Barty Crouch Junior is the parallel to Draco Malfoy. Just replace the Crouch's with the Malfoys when you read this to  see what I'm talking about.

Think about it. Barty's father holds an office of high esteem in the Ministry. Therefore he would expect his son to act with an extreme dignity, honesty, and perfection. Perhaps to the extent of ingnoring completely the presence of mental illness in him and also in his wife.  How healthy do you think it was that Mrs. Crouch was willing to self-sacrifice herself to save her son? To give up her freedom, and that she became so depressed after his incarceration she literally could not live without him?

I think it's very believable that Barty Jr. would turn to the Dark Arts, which offers power - power over others including his overbearing father, and acceptance, something he never got from his father. Perhaps, it is not so wrong to surmise that Bary's mental break occurred during his fledgling days as a Death Eater, that by the time he went to prison the Barty his mother had known was already gone. And for Barty, craving someone to take pride in him,  to feel like he belongs. And a little like he still needs a father, he was only in his upper teens to mid twenties when he was incarcerated.

I believe we should pity Barty. Even though he made his choice, it wasn't out of want. It was out of necessity and misplaced Trust.

3.  I have a feeling that Watkins and Sherrod saving Harriet Year 2 was enough confrontation as the Dursley's could take. It would not be just Daniel's wrath they faced.  They would have had Aurora, Daniel, Remus and Sirius to handle. That would be deadly and possibly counter productive. I have a feeling, though it isn't actually verified at all, that Albus or Minerva contacted Mrs. Figg and told her to petition guardianship over Harriet.

As for "living next door", I don't think Mrs. Figg lives next door. I had a feeling she lived either across the street. Or perhaps in the next block over from Privet Drive. It always made it seem like dropping Harry off at Mrs. Figg's was out of the way for the Dursleys, that they looked down on her because she was an old cat lady. I think this could be very interesting development. Especially because Mrs. Figg will allow visitors and Harriet may have more freedom to do as she pleases.

4. Is Harriet's life every happy in her younger years?

5. Harriet is humble isn't she? I thought it was very in character for her to give her winnings to Kuzanari and the Weasley Twins.

Glad to hear you loved Year 4 so much! Hope to see you cross over into MORA territory - as he takes a break from AHP for a bit.  I too am super stoked for year 5!
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dragonheart876 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2016
Well dumbledore has finally done something right with harriet! Can't wait to see what he's up to.

Yeah I get what you mean about Crouch Jr! He's probably looking for that trust and leadership in harriet now or kinnney even!

That would have been one heck of a confrontation ;)
Doing anything for harriet was a burden to them, lol! In the Yr 5 movie though, it's shown that Figg looks out of the window of her house which is quite close to the Dursley's after the dementor attack. On second thought,I think it was across the street, right!!!!! 🙈

Yup she's a total sweetheart!
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E-H-Indigo Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
1. I know. I am excited to see what unfolds. Albus' plot arc is definitely something we have the ability to expand here.

2. I would be shocked if he tried to go back to Harriet. I honestly don't know how much longer he'll be able to survive on his own. He'll need someone to look after him.

3. To me the movies are entirely an alternate Universe, with all they cut of the films in terms of character development and plot. In the books she doesn't say where she lives. Or at least I don't remember it saying so. If she was right next door to the Drusley's Harry could just walk over, which it didn't seem like from the descriptions in the books. As for the Dursleys' I"m interested to see Dudley's evolution.
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the-mind-of-kleinnak Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I know... I can't believe it either... lol. I've bene trying to work on the outline for Y5, but every time (including just then) I type "Y4" and if I want to get down core plot points I always reach for Goblet of Fire first out of habit.

Haha ahhhhh I was looking forward to that twist. Very curious what that old Dumbledore might be up to, eh? ;)

Well, to this point they've been working quite well together. Kinney's certainly delivered on all his promises. Crouch is too much of a follower though. He has goals and some initiative, but if we were to use a wolf-pack as an analogy, Crouch would be a beta and Kinney would definitely be the pack leader, or alpha. Crouch is brave and will do what's asked of him and do it damn well, but he's not a leader. And Kinney sure as hell is no follower. Crouch just finally got: A.) a bit too pushy against his new pack-leader, and B.) made the critical mistake of bad-mouthing Gideon in front of Kinney. There's something very significant in that... but we've definitely not seen the end of Barty Crouch Jr ;)

Me...? Build up readers' expectations and then side-swipe them with something totally different and completely unexpected...? Surely I'd never do such a thing! Innocent Smile Icon 
That being said, regarding the Mrs Figg situation, oh the Dursleys are completely aware that Harriet is being taken away. Hence why they weren't even there. And really... they never actually wanted her there in the first place :-P so not likely much fighting is going to happen over custody, eh? lol.

Haha thanks :) I'm glad people like him as much as they have :). He might not be one of my creations but I enjoy him as a character. And I guess this means we'll see more of him and perhaps finally get to know his little sister better in the future? ;)

As for Harriet and boys... well... a few things are happening.
1.) Boys are now getting to that age where they start noticing girls in a bit more serious way.
2.) Harriet is finally developing a more grown up figure.
3.) She was exposed as being a victim of Rita Skeeter, so people already feel more sympathetic towards her as opposed to Harry
3.) She's famous... that's going to draw a lot of attention in the days ahead.

Well... in Hyland's defence... Hyland himself has his eyes set on Antoinette. His split side though, Jerrad... well he has eyes for "anything that moves." But don't worry... our bashful bard doesn't give up easily ;)

Thanks :D I'm excited too for sure :)
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dragonheart876 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2016
Already started planning, huh?! Great!

Hope that it's something that won't get dumbledore killed ;)

But doesn't crouch consider Harriet as his leader? The one he's willing to follow!? What is so secretive about Giedon? How old is he, again? Can't imagine that someone like kinnney has a kid. Who was the poor girl?! Lol
Someone we know?

Yes! YOU! They obviously don't want her but what about keeping her miserable?! Wasn't that like their ultimate goal? Hahaha
But seriously! I REALLY REALLY wanted one face off between the marauders and Vernon Dursley! No chances of that happening now though! *Sigh *

Also harriet is not actively saying that Voldemort is back like Harry was! I wonder if the ministry will still do the smear campaign against her!

Glad to know that he won't give up easily! Soooo looking forward to some harriet /Finn fluff ❤
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the-mind-of-kleinnak Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
haha, well that's the main reason for the break, to work on outlining the plot and helping e-hindigo with getting MoRA off the ground :).

Haha, I guess he just redeemed himself a bit in some people's eyes then :-P

Welll he wants her to be, but even he admits she's not ready yet. In the meantime, he has Kinney.
Gideon is 11 (*ominous music plays*)
Nope, we do not know (yet) anything about Gideon's mother other than Gideon reminds Kinney of her.

Well, they wanted to suppress her magic while she had to live under their roof, but that was about it, really.
*pats head consolingly*

Well to be fair, Harry never said anything about it until he had to start dealing with Umbridge at Hogwarts. It was Dumbledore (and now Howe) who put their faces in the crosshairs there.

Haha, well I do know just how much fluff to give and when ;). I am glad people warmed to Finn so much and so quickly. Originally, Finn was supposed to be more or less an exclusively MoRA character. But he's definitely been a hit :) which pleases me. I like to see him do well because I like the idea of Harriet, such a symbol of the wizarding world, taking up with a muggle. There's a nice message to it :) Naturally I want it to mean *more* than that, but it is part of what I like about that potential pairing :). That and there's a lot of me in him... so it's flattering :-P
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Owner308 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016
Interesting ending. Im curious how the story will progress.
Also for all that Kinney has done and what is revealed in this chapter. 
Job well done Kleinnak
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E-H-Indigo Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Owner308

Isn't Kinney a great addition to the overall fabric of the story. He is one of my favorite villains.
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Owner308 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2016
Indeed he is
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the-mind-of-kleinnak Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
*bows* Kinney is disturbingly fun to write... lol.
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Ciaxlia Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG SO MUCH HAPPENED.

I AM SO PUMPED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. THIS WAS SUCH A NICE SURPRISE IN MY INBOX TODAY! I FEEL LIKE I GOT AN EARLY CHRISTMAS GIFT.

Seriously though, so spectacular. I live that she gave the money to kuzanari, and to Fred and George. Simply awesome.

I have to say though, I hope to see more Keiran, he's honestly my favorite.

BUT I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. OH JEEZ. SO EXCITED AND PUMPED. THANK YOU FOR STILL WRITING.
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E-H-Indigo Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Ciaxlia

Glad you're pumped. But sorry to burst your bubble. Year 4 has come to and end. This is the last chapter. You'll now have to patiently wait for Year 5 - and also be enticed to read MORA while you wait. We're going to be working on that in the meantime.
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the-mind-of-kleinnak Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
haha oh yes... lots happened... and lots of changes are on the way ;)

Awwww, I did consider saving this for Christmas, but I wanted to post it on the 2 year Anniversary of the launch of Y4 more :)

I'm glad you liked that touch :) I loved writing Kazuzu, he deserved something for his efforts :)

Awwww, he is pretty wonderful :)

Awwww thanks :) well, now we begin about a 2 month break, but it'll be filled with me working on planning out everything for Y5 :).
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mikaela2015 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016
Amazing!!
Just simply amazing!!

Awesome way to end Year 4!!!

Looking forward to Year 5!!!!
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E-H-Indigo Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
mikaela2015

Did you have any favorite moments for this year?
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mikaela2015 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2016
Yes.

The part where Daniel and Aurora tell Harriet they're going to adopt her
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E-H-Indigo Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
As an adopted person it made me very happy :-)
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the-mind-of-kleinnak Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :D I was looking forward to that final scene for SOOOOOOOOOO long...
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Leopold002 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Looking forward to Year 5. 
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the-mind-of-kleinnak Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
thanks!
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Leopold002 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Can't help but wonder about Kinney's plans. And as for Dolores, less said the better. 
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the-mind-of-kleinnak Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed, indeed...
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SofiaPotter Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016  Student Writer
Excited for Year 5!
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the-mind-of-kleinnak Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
me too :)
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